Said the Father, to the son.
"Why do you do do this, why is it so?
Come pray with me,
Whats done is done."
"Untie me now, and come,
Seek salvation.
Your soul is tormented, your heart is shattered,
Peace and prayer, will heal you some."
"The lord hath forgiven,
If thou hast repented.
A sinner no more, you'll still be
Part of the Lord's great big family".
That was all he spoke. For he was stopped, gagged, and blinded by black cloth.
And a low laugh was heard.The laugh of a desperate man. And cornered men were always dangerous, since time eternal...
"Why do you do do this, why is it so?
Come pray with me,
Whats done is done."
"Untie me now, and come,
Seek salvation.
Your soul is tormented, your heart is shattered,
Peace and prayer, will heal you some."
"The lord hath forgiven,
If thou hast repented.
A sinner no more, you'll still be
Part of the Lord's great big family".
That was all he spoke. For he was stopped, gagged, and blinded by black cloth.
And a low laugh was heard.The laugh of a desperate man. And cornered men were always dangerous, since time eternal...
9 people commented:
Damu pa kmu to?.. Nano ni klase blog man?
the next shakespeare in making.
Shiva
CrAzYbLoG
v.CoL
Gud one man..!!!
Wow! Keeps getting darker and better.
For me this is Gothic. There is this ease which I like about your writing :)
Cheers!
PS: I updated my blog. I would love to see you there :)
@ lotto er, what?
@ shiva - not really dude.
Sadder.
@ prashanth, dame- TY for comin along. Nice folksz.
@ numb- yeah numb, i came, i read, i banged my head.
Because you write so well.
teach me how, sumday.
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